I am good at video games. When I play video games I feel happy. If someone says that I can't play video games I get extremely mad!
Chapter 1
A problem in the story is that the wolf dog is starving and won't eat. The solution to the problem is that Tao finds what is wrong the dog. There was a bone splinter in the dogs mouth so he couldn't eat. Tao removes it.
Another problem is that Tao wants to draw but it's a taboo. I think that the resolution is that Tao will draw in a secret spot where they can't find him.
Chapter 2
Tao removes the splinter from the dogs mouth.Another thing that happened is that Tao got in trouble.
Chapter3
Tao and Ram leaarned to hunt.
Tao saaid he is going to hunt alone.
I feel angry. Tao is a silly boy. He is also lazy. He shuldn't taalk to me like that. I'm much wiser than him.Also stronger. How dare he say that we should hunt with wolf dogs.
Chapter 8
I think the girl should go to art school and the parents are wrong. she can make money by selling her art to people.
Chapter 9
Graybeard changed his mind because Tao wouldn't give up. Graybeard thinks Tao is good at art.
Chapter 11
I think Graybeard is a good teacher because Tao wants to draw but Graybeard says that if you draw erase your images so Volt can't see that you drew images.
Yes I would have liked Graybeard to teach me a skill because I am not that good at drawing.
The Giver
Chapter 1 Page7
Quote: "My childcare group was at the play area, and we had a visiting group of Sevens, and they didn't obey the rules at all."
Explanation: They call children by there age group.
I think that it might make them feel bad.
Chapter 2 Page 14
Quote: "When I was 11 ," his father said now," as you are,Jonas,I was very impatient,waiting for the Ceremony of Twelve."
Explanation: This tells me that they have a ceremony when you become 12.
I think it isn't a good idea because they do the ceremony only for a day and it's for every 11 year old.
Chapter 3 Page 20
Quote: " Maybe he has the same Birthmother as you."
Explanation: Every childs mom is not there Birthmother.
That is not good that every single child's mom is not there birthmother.
Chapter4 Page 30-31
Quote: "They told his whole life before they released him."
Explanation: I think that release means they let them leave.
That is a good idea.
Chapter5 Page 36
Quote: "But what about the treatment."
Explanation:This tells me that they treat people when they get stirrings.
I thougt that is a good idea for some people.
Chapter6 Page 40
Quote: And this year you get your assinement.
Explanation: This means they get jobs at the age of 12.
That is a bad idea because it might put pressure on kids.
Chapter7 Page 48
Quote: They were aranged by number.
Explanation: This means when they were born they got a number.
I don't like that because when you are born you have a name not a number.
Chapter8 Page 57
Quote: "Jonas has been selected."
Explanation: This means Jonas got a special job.
That is a good thing for Jonas.
Chapter9 Page 62
Quote: Now for the first time in 12 years of his life,Jonas felt seperate,different.
Explanation: This means Jonas felt special.
That's a good thing because everyone should be different.
Chapter10 Page 70
Quote: No doors in the community are locked,ever.
Explanation: This means they live in a peaceful community.
I think it's good that they live in a peaceful community.
Chapter11 Page 82
Quote: " Before Sameness. Before Climate Controll."
Explanation: This means they looked the same and they controlled the weather.
I don't think controlling the weather and looking the same would be a good thing.
Chapter12 Page 87
Quote: " I apologi---" Jonas began,and then stopped.
Explanation:This means everyone else has to apologize except Jonas.
That is not nice because everyone should apologize.
Chapter13 Page93
Quote: "But now I can see colors,at least sometimes."
Explanation: This tells me that the rest of the community is colorblind.
That is a really bad thing.
Chapter14 Page 103
Quote: They have never known pain.
Explanation: They don't have the memory of pain.
That is a bad and good thing because if you don't feel pain the first time you feel pain it will hurt more but pain makes you cry so if you don't feel pain you won't cry.
Chapter15 Page 112
Quote:"Please,"he gasped,"take some of the pain."
Explanation: This means only the people who have the memory of pain feel it.
That's bad everyone should know what pain is.
Chapter16 Page 120
Quote:"Your father means you used a very generalized wordm,so meaningless.
Explanation: This tells me that in there community there is no love.
I think that is horrible because love is a important feeling.
Chapter17 Page 123
Quote: He had not taken pills for 4 weeks.
Explanation: This means he doesn't take his pills when he gets the stirrings.
I think it's okay but not great.
Chapter18 Page 135
Quote:"That when she was gone'the memories came back to the people."
Explanation: That tells me when the Reciever dies the memories go back to the people.
It's good except for the part where the Reciever dies.
Chapter19 Page 141
Quote: He killed it.
Explanation: This tells me that when they release someone they kill them.
That is the worst thing they can do to people
Chapter20 Page 143
Quote:"I'll take care of that sir,"Jonas mimicked in a cruel sarcastic voice.
Explanation: This tells me that Jonas is really angry.
It's okay that he is angry because it is a feeling.
Chapter21 Page 154
Quote: Even I voted for Gabriel's release.
Explanation: This tells me they vote on releases.
That is bad because they shouldn't vote when someone is going to die.
Chapter22 Page 163
Quote: He no longer cared about himself.
Explanation: This tells me that Jonas gave up hope.
That is not good because you should always have hope.
Chapter23 Page 168
Quote: He heard people singing.
Explanation: This tells me he might have died.
That is not good because he tried to run away.
History Report
My report is about the weapons and tools they used in the Shang Dynasty. Also how they were made. Then what weapons they used ,and who the troops fought. Hope you like my report.
The Shang made bronze. Bronze is an alloy made of tin and copper. Bronze is used weapons and armor. The Shang’s troops and infantry used these weapons. Mao spears, yue’ pole axes, ge pole-based axes, daggers, and the compound bow. They also made bronze vessels. Later they made the bronze daggers longer and thinner for longer range hits.
Even though the Shang’s troops and infantry used bronze weapons, commoners used weapons made of stone.
The troops and infantry fought in bronze chariots. The troops and infantry fought barbarians in chariots. The troops and infantry fought in three different sections, the middle section, the left section, and the right section. This made it easier for the troop and infantry to surround the barbarians. This also made it easier to attack the barbarians with the compound bow in bronze chariots.
So, to explain my report the Shang invented bronze, an alloy of tin and copper, to use as weapons such as the mao spear, yue’ pole axes, ge pole-based axes, daggers, and the compound bow. The commoners used stone. The infantry and troops used bronze. The troops and infantry fought barbarians in chariots. That is the end, hope you enjoyed it.
Chapter 1
A problem in the story is that the wolf dog is starving and won't eat. The solution to the problem is that Tao finds what is wrong the dog. There was a bone splinter in the dogs mouth so he couldn't eat. Tao removes it.
Another problem is that Tao wants to draw but it's a taboo. I think that the resolution is that Tao will draw in a secret spot where they can't find him.
Chapter 2
Tao removes the splinter from the dogs mouth.Another thing that happened is that Tao got in trouble.
Chapter3
Tao and Ram leaarned to hunt.
Tao saaid he is going to hunt alone.
I feel angry. Tao is a silly boy. He is also lazy. He shuldn't taalk to me like that. I'm much wiser than him.Also stronger. How dare he say that we should hunt with wolf dogs.
Chapter 8
I think the girl should go to art school and the parents are wrong. she can make money by selling her art to people.
Chapter 9
Graybeard changed his mind because Tao wouldn't give up. Graybeard thinks Tao is good at art.
Chapter 11
I think Graybeard is a good teacher because Tao wants to draw but Graybeard says that if you draw erase your images so Volt can't see that you drew images.
Yes I would have liked Graybeard to teach me a skill because I am not that good at drawing.
The Giver
Chapter 1 Page7
Quote: "My childcare group was at the play area, and we had a visiting group of Sevens, and they didn't obey the rules at all."
Explanation: They call children by there age group.
I think that it might make them feel bad.
Chapter 2 Page 14
Quote: "When I was 11 ," his father said now," as you are,Jonas,I was very impatient,waiting for the Ceremony of Twelve."
Explanation: This tells me that they have a ceremony when you become 12.
I think it isn't a good idea because they do the ceremony only for a day and it's for every 11 year old.
Chapter 3 Page 20
Quote: " Maybe he has the same Birthmother as you."
Explanation: Every childs mom is not there Birthmother.
That is not good that every single child's mom is not there birthmother.
Chapter4 Page 30-31
Quote: "They told his whole life before they released him."
Explanation: I think that release means they let them leave.
That is a good idea.
Chapter5 Page 36
Quote: "But what about the treatment."
Explanation:This tells me that they treat people when they get stirrings.
I thougt that is a good idea for some people.
Chapter6 Page 40
Quote: And this year you get your assinement.
Explanation: This means they get jobs at the age of 12.
That is a bad idea because it might put pressure on kids.
Chapter7 Page 48
Quote: They were aranged by number.
Explanation: This means when they were born they got a number.
I don't like that because when you are born you have a name not a number.
Chapter8 Page 57
Quote: "Jonas has been selected."
Explanation: This means Jonas got a special job.
That is a good thing for Jonas.
Chapter9 Page 62
Quote: Now for the first time in 12 years of his life,Jonas felt seperate,different.
Explanation: This means Jonas felt special.
That's a good thing because everyone should be different.
Chapter10 Page 70
Quote: No doors in the community are locked,ever.
Explanation: This means they live in a peaceful community.
I think it's good that they live in a peaceful community.
Chapter11 Page 82
Quote: " Before Sameness. Before Climate Controll."
Explanation: This means they looked the same and they controlled the weather.
I don't think controlling the weather and looking the same would be a good thing.
Chapter12 Page 87
Quote: " I apologi---" Jonas began,and then stopped.
Explanation:This means everyone else has to apologize except Jonas.
That is not nice because everyone should apologize.
Chapter13 Page93
Quote: "But now I can see colors,at least sometimes."
Explanation: This tells me that the rest of the community is colorblind.
That is a really bad thing.
Chapter14 Page 103
Quote: They have never known pain.
Explanation: They don't have the memory of pain.
That is a bad and good thing because if you don't feel pain the first time you feel pain it will hurt more but pain makes you cry so if you don't feel pain you won't cry.
Chapter15 Page 112
Quote:"Please,"he gasped,"take some of the pain."
Explanation: This means only the people who have the memory of pain feel it.
That's bad everyone should know what pain is.
Chapter16 Page 120
Quote:"Your father means you used a very generalized wordm,so meaningless.
Explanation: This tells me that in there community there is no love.
I think that is horrible because love is a important feeling.
Chapter17 Page 123
Quote: He had not taken pills for 4 weeks.
Explanation: This means he doesn't take his pills when he gets the stirrings.
I think it's okay but not great.
Chapter18 Page 135
Quote:"That when she was gone'the memories came back to the people."
Explanation: That tells me when the Reciever dies the memories go back to the people.
It's good except for the part where the Reciever dies.
Chapter19 Page 141
Quote: He killed it.
Explanation: This tells me that when they release someone they kill them.
That is the worst thing they can do to people
Chapter20 Page 143
Quote:"I'll take care of that sir,"Jonas mimicked in a cruel sarcastic voice.
Explanation: This tells me that Jonas is really angry.
It's okay that he is angry because it is a feeling.
Chapter21 Page 154
Quote: Even I voted for Gabriel's release.
Explanation: This tells me they vote on releases.
That is bad because they shouldn't vote when someone is going to die.
Chapter22 Page 163
Quote: He no longer cared about himself.
Explanation: This tells me that Jonas gave up hope.
That is not good because you should always have hope.
Chapter23 Page 168
Quote: He heard people singing.
Explanation: This tells me he might have died.
That is not good because he tried to run away.
History Report
My report is about the weapons and tools they used in the Shang Dynasty. Also how they were made. Then what weapons they used ,and who the troops fought. Hope you like my report.
The Shang made bronze. Bronze is an alloy made of tin and copper. Bronze is used weapons and armor. The Shang’s troops and infantry used these weapons. Mao spears, yue’ pole axes, ge pole-based axes, daggers, and the compound bow. They also made bronze vessels. Later they made the bronze daggers longer and thinner for longer range hits.
Even though the Shang’s troops and infantry used bronze weapons, commoners used weapons made of stone.
The troops and infantry fought in bronze chariots. The troops and infantry fought barbarians in chariots. The troops and infantry fought in three different sections, the middle section, the left section, and the right section. This made it easier for the troop and infantry to surround the barbarians. This also made it easier to attack the barbarians with the compound bow in bronze chariots.
So, to explain my report the Shang invented bronze, an alloy of tin and copper, to use as weapons such as the mao spear, yue’ pole axes, ge pole-based axes, daggers, and the compound bow. The commoners used stone. The infantry and troops used bronze. The troops and infantry fought barbarians in chariots. That is the end, hope you enjoyed it.